- remember to start in the middle of the story. The reader needs a hook and therefore start were they're action!!! Think about Fight Club-- the movie starts at the end of the actual story, but it's way more interesting to start with your main character with a gun in his mouth than with a man who finds he can't sleep and hates his job.
- ways to start:
- With a generalization-- Any man with a large fourtune is in hunt of a wife.
- With a description (character or setting--though personal I find this one weak)
- With a narrative summary--I was born...
- With dialogue-- "Where were you last night," John asked
- with serveral character but no dialogue-- Betty and Ralph silently ate they're food in the bar
- with a setting and only 1 character-- Mary sat in central park alone on a Monday night.
- with a reminiscent narrator-- THe summer of 1985 was when I first fall in love.
- With a child narrator-- Mommy throw a potted plant at Daddy's head--after that we never saw him again.
- By establishing point of view--Elm was an eldery lady or I never saw myself as old-- just not fresh.
Share with us: What's your first line? What's your favorite first line in a published book?
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