Sunday, November 8, 2009

What if? for a stuck story

This is my favorite advise for writer's block:
On a separate shee of paper write: What If. Now write five ways of continuing the story, not ending the story, but continuing the story to the next event, scene,e tc. Let your imagination go wild. Loosen up your thinking about the events in the story. your what if's can be as diverse as your imagination can make them. More than likely, and this has proved true through years of teaching and writing, one of the What Ifs will feel right, organic, to the story and that is the direction in which you should go if you can't see it write on a few of them and see where it takes you.

Saturday, November 7, 2009

Dialog

Get a friend and improve a scene you're writing about. Make sure that it's a disagreement or an emotional event. does any snippets of dialog work? If so write them down!

Friday, November 6, 2009

For the Plot

Break your story idea down into 3 sentences of 3 words each. this will give you a beginning, middle, and end and help you understand the architecture of the work. By having to choose 3 verbs you'll be forcing yourself to consider the 3 pts of the action.

Thursday, November 5, 2009

Scene Change

If a scene isn't working try changing the action or setting the scene is housed in.
For example how does a scene read different if a couple is planning their honeymoon while painting a room versus in bed after making love?

Wednesday, November 4, 2009

Character exercise

Write the character's name on top of page and write 10 sentences:
He or she is the sort of person who:________.

Tuesday, November 3, 2009

Stuck?

The dread writer's block. I read an article online the other day about this writer who has never had writer's block. She defined it as when one can't write about anything at all. That if you get one, one should either a) stop writing b) or change subjects/projects.

I have a different definition. I believe that starting a project isn't difficult.... heck I can start millions of writings with out a problem; however, when I get done with my beginning scene, I have nothing more to add, since I don't know what happens next. That to me is a writer's block when your just stuck on ANY one project.

With NaNoWriMo you don't have leisure to walk away from your piece for too long. Yeah you might be able to leave it for the night or take a much needed R&R day, but really how long can one go without writing and meet the deadline? If worst comes to worst then go for a change in subjects because the most important thing about NaNoWriMo is the word count... it doesn't have to make sense or even be good--just the amount of words matter.

The problem with writer's block is it so individual and there many reason why some one might be blocked.
  • The internal critic is being a bully and telling you everything you write sucks
  • You can't focus because the bills are due, the dog needs to be walked, the children are screaming.
  • You just don't know what happens next
  • Tired of writing or you find yourself in a rout
  • you're really procrastinating
  • You need facts or information about something for the story to move on

So, here's today's advice: walk away for the day. Try and figure out what's stopping you from writing. Take a walk, nap, do yoga, mediate, take shower. Come back to your writing. If you're still stuck, write a scene later in the story that you already have planned, write a 500 word description about your setting, make a note to insert a needed fact in the story or look it up, basic write something that deals with your story. If you do this for a few writing sessions and still can't get 'un-block' write on a different story idea.

Share with us: What's the normal reason why you have writer's block and what works to get your creative juices flowing again?

Monday, November 2, 2009

What's in a Character?

Write the character's name on top of the page. write 5 to 10 lines that start with:
He (or she) is the sort of person who...
Come up with some fresh unquie traits and qualities about your character.

Share with us: What's your favorite trait about your main character?

Sunday, November 1, 2009

GO!!!!

Some people (I'm not one of them) believe that the blank piece of paper is a dunting task. That the start of things is the most difficult thing an author does. I find that most writer's block advice deals with this stage so if you have difficulty finding the opening words just look around the internet or book store for these excerises. Here are some that I have saved from my favorite writing books:
  • remember to start in the middle of the story. The reader needs a hook and therefore start were they're action!!! Think about Fight Club-- the movie starts at the end of the actual story, but it's way more interesting to start with your main character with a gun in his mouth than with a man who finds he can't sleep and hates his job.
  • ways to start:
  • With a generalization-- Any man with a large fourtune is in hunt of a wife.
  • With a description (character or setting--though personal I find this one weak)
  • With a narrative summary--I was born...
  • With dialogue-- "Where were you last night," John asked
  • with serveral character but no dialogue-- Betty and Ralph silently ate they're food in the bar
  • with a setting and only 1 character-- Mary sat in central park alone on a Monday night.
  • with a reminiscent narrator-- THe summer of 1985 was when I first fall in love.
  • With a child narrator-- Mommy throw a potted plant at Daddy's head--after that we never saw him again.
  • By establishing point of view--Elm was an eldery lady or I never saw myself as old-- just not fresh.

Share with us: What's your first line? What's your favorite first line in a published book?

Saturday, October 31, 2009

Get Set....Outline

Ok, so you might not have to know EVERYTHING about your NaNoWriMo project. And the use of a 50 point summary outline with raising actions, character profiles, and hours worth of research isn't needed. However, it might be a good idea to have SOMETHING in mind before you start your frantic writing. NaNoWriMo allows writers to have outlines, summaries, character profiles-- ready before the month begins... these items however, cannot be counted in the total word count. NaNoWriMo also suggest to start with new characters and a new story because if you already put time and energy into a story you're not willing to just willy-nilly write on for just the word count *because you're too invested* and if you're trying to write a complete thing in a month your critic needs to be turned off. Again for more 'rules' on NaNoWriMo visit their website. So here some ideas for different stages of 'outlining.'

I have nothing yet...
If you don't have any idea what you want to write about, invest some time searching writing exercises in books and online.
here's a few that I find helpful:
  • Write for 10 minutes on I want to write....
  • Do a 10 minute exercise that starts with "Where were you last night?"
  • Everything changed when...
  • Pull out a poem or a paragraph from an author that you enjoy. Read it. now write a time writing on either a phase or the theme or anything that triggers a thoughts and just go with it.

I got an idea...

So you have a snippet. It might be a scene (normally what I start with), character, a setting, or some vague thought, item, or setting. Good let's build on it.

  • create 1 sentence that your story is about. take sometime and think about it until you can narrow it down. Example: Puppet attempts to become a real boy. Guy loses girl and goes all out to get her back. Write it down on the top of each page and make sure that the story follows this one sentence.
  • Brainstorm-- write out a list or do a web chart to organized your thoughts. This is really helpful for vague ideas or subjects. example: Say you want to write about masks. get a fresh piece of paper and write it in the middle of the paper. draw line and write something about the masks you want to write about like 'history of masks' and then jot down all the details that you already know about the masks you want to write about (when they were made, who made them, what culture are they from.). Another line from the middle and write another broad thing about the masks like 'appearance' and continue doing the web until you have all your know details. Hopefully by writing down everything you already know about this idea you can conjure up elements of the story behind it.
  • Do you have a character in mind? Write down everything you know about this person, fill out a character profile (a form that you create or find one of the Internet that tells you the basics about your character's appearance, family status, dreams, goals, background everything you can think of), or do a character chart.

In a character chart is a two column three row grid. at the top write down you main character. on the left column write down these questions one in each box: What does the character want? Why does he want this? (or what's his motivation?) and What's stopping him from getting what he wants? If you can answer all three of these questions you have your complete story. In your revision process, if a scene doesn't deal with any of these three questions... you don't need it (granted for the three question it's more of a does this get your character closer or further from their goal that you want to keep in mind for the scene).

I Know My Story

OK so you know what's your doing. You have your characters and main plot points in mind. So what should you do?

  • If your character is doing something you don't know much about (say he's a doctor) you might want to research and stash articles, jargon, and other things about his field or anything else you need to research.
  • Write out the whole outline. Either do a report outline or get different colored index cards and color code your characters, scenes, themes, settings, or any other story element you want. I actually have a poster broad with Velcro strips running across it. I then put Velcro strips on the back of my cards and use this as a visual story broad to keep all my facts straight. Having these on note cards make it easier if you want to use flashbacks or rearrange the plot order of events.
  • skim through like genera's to get your creative juices flowing, bookmark, websites, writing books, or favorite reading books for inspiration. etc.

Share with us: What's your favorite writing prompt? How do you 'outline' your writing?

Friday, October 30, 2009

Get Ready

  1. Sign up with NaNoWriMo site or create your own goal. Write down this goal down somewhere where you can see it daily. Make sure that the goal has:
  • a due date (Exp due date is November 30th at 11:59 PM)
  • is attainable (50,000 words = roughly a 3.3 pages a day for a month)
  • is measurable. (50,000 words)

2. Get the materials you need:

  • How do you write? pens, paper, computer, ink, snacks etc.
  • Where do you write: set up a space used for writing where you can keep it free from other distractions. Make sure to let family and friends know when you're writing so you won't be disturbed.

3. Set a Plan

  • If you lead a busy life it's important to cut out time to focus on your writing. If that means cutting out an hour at the same time each day make sure you schedule it in to your life.
  • Also make a plan on how you're going to handle writers' block or any other writing problems.
  • Do the math. If you are only planning on writing on the weekends make sure you're hitting the right word count each time you write, or create extra time to dedicate to catching up.

4. Get support!!!

  • Visit with other writer friends
  • Join online communities that NaNoWriMo offers
  • borrow or buy writing books or post inspirational sayings around your writing space
  • attend writing groups in your area provided by libraries and other community hubs.
  • Have a 'bitch-with-friend' that will listen and understands your writing pains

5. Write!!! As the saying goes 'A writer is someone that writes today.' You can't achieve any of your writing goals if you don't put your sweat and blood into it. So tie and gag your internal critic and let your hand fly across the page. Even if what you write is silly or stupid or doesn't fit into what you're trying to illustrate-- keep going.

Share with us: How do you set yourself up for a new project? Or what type of support or writing method really works for you?

Sunday, October 25, 2009

NaNoWriMo is almost here!!!


Yes, that's right, NaNoWriMo starts a week from today. And is NaNoWriMo? National Novel Writing Month were crazed writers attempt to create a piece of writing the length of a novel, 50,000 words in one month. Insane, I know. I first heard about National Novel Writing when I was in college. I happened to be looking through a writing magazine when the ad jump up at me. Since then I've been supporting and promoting this event for all my writing friends. Funny, that this year is the first that I'll serious attempt to do it myself. Last year I did create a November writing goal for myself, which quickly went to the way side in a few days. This time I'm planning on really trying this out. So join me as I arm myself if my trusted pen and paper and support group to attempt something I've yet to accomplish. I'm going to attempt to actually finish a piece of writing longer than 20 pages. I know, scary isn't it?

If you have more questions about NaNoWriMo please visit their website at http://nanowrimo.org/. Of course I you don't have to attempt something so massive as a full novel-- but if you write, use this month to come up with reachable goals for you. Since National Blog Writing Month is also in November, maybe you should start there and attempt to write daily. buy a journal and try to fill it by the end of the month, commit yourself on researching agencies and publishing houses if you have already finished a project. Fool-proof you query and cover letters, research/save for/and sign up for a writing conference this month or in the future -- there's some many wonderful things you can do with this.

Check in with this blog--I'm planning on posting solutions to writer's block and inspirational quotes daily. Happy Writing!

Sunday, May 31, 2009

What do I look like?

The first thing anyone says about me when they met me is: Look at those ears!


I've been describe on being part:

Bunny





Fox





Donkey



Kanagroo



Dingo


(Grated I am part Austerlian Cattle Dog which were breed from Dingos)



So, what do you think I look most like?

Update on Book Challenge

So I'm on track with my book challenge. Yay for keeping up with goals! Hopefully I'll be adding the dates on the entries when I have the list in front of me. This is what I got so far:

Amazing Gracie by Dan Dye
B Burroughs, Augusten; Sellevision: a novel.
C
Dewey: The Small-Town Library Cat Who Touched the World by Vicki Myron
E
Feist, Raymond Magician: Apprentice
Gosling, Sam Snoop: What Your Stuff Says About You
Hughes, Marcia Life's 2 Percent Solution: Simple Steps to Achieve Happiness and Balance
I
J
Kirshchner, Diana Love in 90 Days: The Essential Guide to Finding Your Own True Love
Lundin, Stephen C., Harry Paul, John Christensen Fish! A Remarkable Way to Boost Morale and Improve Results
Magician: Master by Raymond Feist
N
Oolong Dead by Laura Childs
Pausch, Randy The Last Lecture
Q
R
Secert Diary of Ann Boleyn by Robin Maxwell
T
U
V
W
X
Y
Z

I'm thinking next year I'm going to do a simaliar challenge but using the name of subjcts in biographies. I also some day want to read all of the Greek classics back to back and read all of Shakespeare's plays in a month.
So how is everyone else doing on the yearly book goals?

Dang it! they thought of my idea

So I came up with this amazing idea back at the beginning of the year. Imagine it... a website about trading and tracking books...all over the Denver area. Seeing if people would really give away they're books and to whom and what type of person would do it most willingly. That's right just like Find George but with books. Friend Rachel even came up with the best name: BookRipple. I researched the web, couldn't find anything like it, I bought the domain, started designing the web page. I even started getting books to start passing out. And what do you know? It;s already been done. To a 'T" actually better than a "T". But the wonderful thing about this is it was successful... over 700,000 members around the WORLD!!! Check it out at http://www.bookcrossing.com/. Well here's to a great idea.

Saturday, May 16, 2009

Remi's letter to Godmother Michelle

Dear Godmother Michele,
thank you so much for convincing my human on coming to DDFL. She truly is a wonderful and overly concern owner. I also wanted to thank you for the lovely toy. It's my favorite 'killing' toy-- and I reserve all my growls and head swings for it. Maybe I can convince my human on buying me more of these type of anaimals. I haven't tired my cookie yet since I've had an upset tummy of late, but it sure does smell good. Thank you again for all your thoughtfulness, support and love.
From your Godson puppy,
Remington

Wednesday, April 29, 2009

It's A Boy!!!


Yes, that’s right I made a commitment and got myself a dog last night. A beautiful boy 9 months old Australian Cattle/Corgi (and probably some type of hound since he has had his nose to the ground since coming home) is now part of the Butler family. He was adopted at the Denver Dumb Friends League at 8:00 last night. I’ve named him Remmington Alexander Butler. Both owner (guardian, human companion—anything but the ‘m’ word) and dog are doing great.